STORYBOARDS
Could have drawn more fluent images i.e. less of a jump in scenario of images, so the viewer can understand more clearly how the footage will playout.
RESEARCH/INFLUENCES
Good comparing between Kate Nash's video and how they plan to implement similar ideas. Could have standardised the screen shots in the influence section i.e the last two images are quite small.
Impressive magazine album cover art, although the DVD cover could have included a few more items to spice up the image.
CONCEPT FOR VIDEO
Good amount of detail giving a clear idea of what they are hoping to achieve. They could however re-phrase some of the sentences as a few don't make sense. I.e "Shaky close ups of the lead singer and also her lover", and "Freeze on love interest".
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