What We Thought About The Feedback

As a group we took into account what the media class and what Tanya told us to improve and what needed to be added, we agreed with what needed to be added and were planning to include the stuff anyway in our final cut. The criticisms made were constructive and it has helped us to know what a lot of people felt should be changed and added, this should help us to improve our final cut. Having different members of our class and our teacher analysing our work gave a range of different opinions. It was good to hear what other people thought about our work from a subjective point of view, it was interesting to look at what other people had been creating too and looking at how all the groups differed.

What we plan to add to improve our work:

• More close ups of the performer
• Some more cuts
• Add in the night time scenes