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Genre Characteristics: In connection with the 'alternative folk' theme we really liked how you used the surrounding country side, public pathways and although slightly strange and unrelated with visuals, the pub scene is also a good link with the genre.
The connection is really good with the "relationship" and how Liv looks and interacts with Derek. Although at the end there is a contradiction with the lyrics "wakey-wakey rise and shine" and the face that you are filming at night time but it is not an contradiction, it creates interest and variation.

Music and Visuals: The tempo of the music fits well with the pace of the visuals, although in places the shots last a long time and if feels like it drags a little bit but otherwise really good!

Demands of Record Label: This is accomplished well as there are many good close ups.

Voyeurism: There are notions of looking especially when Liv is with Derek with the 'memory' effect of looking back on a moment in time.

Intertextuality: There is obviously the intertextuality to 'twilight' which is fun and interesting to watch and creates variation.unwelcom