Teacher Feedback on Rough Cut

1. Camera/Mis en scene

• Framing of perfomer effective at beginning but needs to edit to close up at an earlier point (could be from different sector of footage)
• Pan around couple fits with fluidity of the track

2. Editing

• Dissolves are suitable for style of track
• Cut 'through' the line more

3. Genre

• Setting established immedietly and effectively; consistent with expectators of genre
• Light, clothes, location all fir with the genre
• Well performed- fits expectate of female vocal driver video

4. What's missing/Needs to be added

• Close ups of performer need to be added, maybe in a 'studio' location
• Needs more obvious direct address to camera